Planning meetings stuff from week 2 (JAN 9-13)

We brainstormed a completely different idea to our first one, it involved a troubled teenage girl who found a friend that can relate to her but behind the computer he was a criminal he was acting kind to the girl and she trusted him. He was manipulating her and she didn't realize. The problem in this story was her religion which forbid her to be in a relationship with him. We felt this story wasn't exciting enough and we wanted it to be unique. During the planning we suddenly had an amazing idea which we could commit to and it involves a trouble kid which is played by Tawhir and a criminal thug which is played by Daniel Glazier. The story starts with a long shot at the bus stop in which Tawhir receives a text message from his friend saying: "Are you bunking lesson again blud?" He just ignored him and didn't care about him. He was waiting for the bus and catches it to an illusive park. On the ride we tried to film him and the scenery so that the spectator can make a picture of the setting. We also wanted add a special effect where he puts on his headphone and the music can be heard from the audience. When arrives he enters the park by jumping over a fence. The audience can tell he's a dodgy character by his action. In an over the shoulder you can see him taking out something what looks to be like an illegal substance possibly Marijuana. As he smokes the shot is changing from the over the shoulder shot to a medium in which you can see another character who is played by Daniel G. . He comes up to him and they started arguing and Daniel ran out of patience and set Tawhir straight. He punched and robbed him. On the next day Tawhir was eating in a fast food restaurant and as he was walking out he sees Daniel on a public high street Daniel recognizes him and ran away. Tawhir ran after him and Daniel ran into the back of a deserted building where he trips and crying for mercy, you can see the anger in Tawhir's face and the audience can tell that something is going to happen in the next few seconds. The camera focuses on the brick and this is a significant object as it will be a murder weapon. Tawhir picks it up and you can only see a shot where he drops brick and walks away. This idea was good but during we were filming we realized that it is hard to film on some places like the bus scene or the park because we needed permission to film there so after a few tries we went back to change the story a slightly bit. The basic idea was there and we wanted to make it enjoyable for the audience.